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he diagram gives information about the process by which clay pots are manufactured.

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The diagram gives information about the process by which clay pots are manufactured. Overall, it can be seen that there are 11main stages in this process, beginning with taking raw materials/natural soil and culminating in selling the end product to the custorms. At the first stage, soil are brought from under ground by crane machine. Next, they are transported to a factory where they are categorized and cleaned. After that this raw materials are put in the machine and crushed. In order to create pots, they are mixed with water then poured them into a patterns. The process continues with the moulds being dried in the sun around 6 hours. Following this, those moulds are made into pots an assembly line before being heated under the temperature of 1000 degree Celsius. So as to make them eye- catching, they are dipped into a coloring liquid. Then they are fired in the oven again at the appropriate temperature in order to dry the liquid before being sold to customers.

The diagram gives information about the process by which clay pots are manufactured
.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that there are 11main stages in this process, beginning with taking raw materials/natural soil and culminating in selling the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 product to the Possible spelling mistake found.customscu storms
custorms
.

At the first
 stage, soil are brought
 from under ground by crane machine. Next
, they are transported
 to a factory where they are categorized
 and cleaned. After that this raw materials are put
 in the machine and crushed. In order to create pots, they are mixed
 with water then poured them into Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a pattern" or simply "patterns"?a patternpatterns
a patterns
. The process continues with the Possible spelling mistake. 'moulds' is British English.molds
moulds
being dried
 in the sun around 6 hours.

Following this, those Possible spelling mistake. 'moulds' is British English.molds
moulds
are made
 into pots an assembly line This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
being heated
 under the temperature of 1000 degree Celsius. 'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"To
So as to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 them eye- catching, they are dipped
 into a coloring liquid. Then they are fired
 in the oven again at the appropriate temperature in order to dry the liquid This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
being sold
 to customers. 