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The two maps illustrate modifications to the area of Sunnyhills University among and 1995 this day.

The two maps illustrate modifications to the area of Sunnyhills University among and 1995 this day. PMrep
The two maps illustrate modifications to the area of Sunnyhills University among and 1995 this day. We can see implement that the university made many changes during the years this epoch. The location of the buildings at the university has changed, enlarged and new buildings have been added. In addition, the main reception is in the upper left hand corner of the campus. The university is created recreation area for worker and students. There are ornamental trees, benches for sitting. However, around the recreation are is located cafe, pond, scott library, labaratories and table tennis tables. The halls of residence are at the arts buildings. The founders building is between the Watson building and the scott library. In the past, the students' union is at the bus stop. They also built new squash courts and gym. It can be seen that the university area has changed and expanded during this period.
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Sunnyhills
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among and 1995 this day. We can
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implement that the
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university
made
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many
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changes
during the years this epoch.

The location of the
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buildings
at the
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has
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changed
, enlarged and new
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buildings
have been
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added
.
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, the main reception is in the upper
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left hand
corner of the campus. The
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university
is created
recreation area for worker and students. There are ornamental trees, benches for sitting.
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, around the recreation are
is located
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cafe
, pond,
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scott
library,
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labaratories
and table tennis tables. The halls of residence are at the arts
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buildings
. The founders
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building
is between the Watson
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building
and the
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scott
library. In the past, the students' union is at the bus
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stop
. They
also
built new squash courts and gym. It can be
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seen
that the
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area has
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changed
and expanded during this period.
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IELTS academic The two maps illustrate modifications to the area of Sunnyhills University among and 1995 this day.

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