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American consumption of various nutrients.

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The charts given here contains the information regarding the percentage of daily intake of various nutrients like sodium, saturated fat and sugar consumed in meals and snacks by an average person in the usa. Intially, sodium is consumed more in the Dinner when compared to other timings and it's percentage of consumption is 43%. Same percentage of sodium is consumed in both Breakfast and Snacks as it show's 14% of consumption. coming to lunch the percentage consumption of sodium is 29%. Futher, Saturated fat consumption in the Dinner is high when compared to others. As it shows 37% is consumed. while in breakfast and luch 21%, 26% are consumed and for snacks 16% is consumed. By comparing with others snacks has less amount of Saturated fats. Finally, Added Sugar is 42% consumed in the Snack which record's highest recored of percentage when compared to others. In dinner 23% is consumed which ranks second in consumption. 16% and 19% of Added Sugar are consumed in both Break fast and lunch times. By going through the detailed information sodium is more consumed in Dinner and least consumed nutrient is also sodium that consumed both in snacks and breakfast.
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