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chart summary about how people travel

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The chart provide information about how International visitors to New Zealand travel while they are in the county. Nearly 70 percent, come from cả the commonest of transport. Plane and Coach are two transport almost used almost the same amount, more than 30 percent. The fourth most popular transport, 20 percent, come from train. And then, nearly 10 percent, people used Boat as well as a transport. Overall, people enjoy using the public transport than private transport.
The chart provide information about how International visitors to New Zealand travel while they are in the county.

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cả
the commonest of
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transport
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Plane
and Coach are two
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transport
almost
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used
almost the same amount, more than 30
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percent
. The fourth most popular
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transport
, 20
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,
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come
from train. And then,
nearly
10
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,
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people
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used
Boat
as well
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a transport
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Overall
,
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people
enjoy using the public
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than private
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IELTS academic chart summary about how people travel

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
77 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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