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describe a situation when you get lost

describe a situation when you get lost 5bddP
During hiking at the blue mountain, my friends and I got lost for 3 hours. we felt anxious and helpless since we could not find the way out. We realized that we have a paper map in our backpack so we were able to find the exit. It was uneasy for us to find someone and ask for guidance. Finally, we found that we were in a place where we got off the bus. It is important to do some preparation before traveling to new places.
During hiking at the blue mountain, my friends and I
got
lost for 3 hours.
we
felt anxious and helpless since we could not find the way out. We realized that we have a paper map in our backpack
so
we were able to find the exit. It was uneasy for us to find someone and
ask for
guidance.
Finally
, we found that we were in a place where we
got
off the bus. It is
important
to do
some
preparation
before
traveling to new places.
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IELTS academic describe a situation when you get lost

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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