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The diagram illustrates a frog's life cycle which is divided into several stages.

The diagram illustrates a frog's life cycle which is divided into several stages. Nlewj

The diagram illustrates a frog's life cycle which is divided into several stages. Overall, there are seven phases in total, commencing with the frog spawning stage and culminating with the development of an adult frog. The process starts when a large number of fertilized eggs are laid by the female frog then grow into embryos from which very small tadpoles emerge. Following this initial phase, this little tadpole grows bigger, and its limbs begin to appear, allowing it to swim faster. In the next stage of the process, this tadpole begins to develop into a young frog. From here, its forelimbs start to lengthen while the tail shrinks. At the same time, it initate to breathe with its lungs, enables it to go ashore and adopts land life easily. It increases its body mass and shortens tail length in the penultimate stage of the cycle. It eventually matures into a fertile adult frog, and the cycle repeats.

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 into several stages.

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frog
 spawning stage and culminating with the development of an adult frog.

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starts
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a large number of
 fertilized eggs are laid
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frog
 then grow into embryos from which This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
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small
 tadpoles emerge. Following this initial phase, this This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 tadpole grows bigger, and its limbs This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 to appear, allowing it to swim faster.

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 stage of the process, this tadpole This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
begins
 to develop into a young You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoad
frog
. From here, its forelimbs This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 to lengthen while the tail shrinks. At the same time, it Possible spelling mistake found.initiateimitateinstate
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 to breathe with its lungs, enables it to go ashore and adopts land life easily
. It increases its body mass and shortens tail length in the penultimate stage of the cycle. It eventually
 matures into a fertile adult You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoad
frog
, and the cycle repeats. 