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The two maps compare the improvement to the ground floor plan of a university department in two separate years of 2000 and 2015

The two maps compare the improvement to the ground floor plan of a university department in two separate years of 2000 and 2015 JVBMB

The two maps compare the improvement to the ground floor plan of a university department in two separate years of 2000 and 2015 Overall, it is clear that the main building went through some renovation and extension over the course of the years, whereas various amenities were also inserted to the department, comprising a car park and an IT centre. In 2000, there was a library, an office and a single building containing three seminar rooms in the department. Over the next fifteen years, the building was broadened to the North with the accumulation of two new seminar rooms, while the mixture of the library and office to make one large office space were combined. Looking at the maps more closely, one can see that the library was relocated across the corridor from the IT centre in the new building previously a large area of vegetation. Finally, a large car park was constructed in the unused land next to next to the main entrance of the department.

The two maps compare the improvement to the This word is British English. Did you mean "first floor"?first floor
ground floor
 plan of a university You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionofficeareaagencyadministrationcommission
department
 in two separate years of 2000 and 2015

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
building
 went through This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 renovation and extension over the course of the years, whereas various amenities were also
 inserted to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionofficeareaagencyadministrationcommission
department
, comprising a car park and an IT Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
.

In 2000, there was a library, an office and a single You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
building
 containing three seminar rooms in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionofficeareaagencyadministrationcommission
department
. Over the next
 fifteen years, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
building
was broadened
 to the North with the accumulation of two new seminar rooms, while the mixture of the library and office to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 one large office space were combined
.

Looking at the maps more closely
, one can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that the library was relocated
 across the corridor from the IT Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 in the new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
building
 previously a large area of vegetation. Finally
, a large car park was constructed
 in the unused land next
 to next
 to the main entrance of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionofficeareaagencyadministrationcommission
department
. 