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The given pictures illustrate the transformation of a park from 1980 till the time being.

The given pictures illustrate the transformation of a park from 1980 till the time being. b2WYY

The given pictures illustrate the transformation of a park from 1980 till the time being. Overall, it is clear that the infrastructure of the park is now accessible and has more creational places to meet resident’s requirements. In the year 1980, there was only one way which divided the park into two parts. A several number of trees were planted in the North East and flowers were grown in the South along with the wall. Besides that, there was a small water area with several benches around it placed in the Eastern side of the park. Looking at the maps more closely, one can see that the alteration form the year 1980 until now, there were fours paths leading to all four directions of South, North, East and West. In the south Western area the pond is still intact while there are three benches left. The wall, gate and flowers removed are now modified the bushes. A new barbecue grill area with tables has been set up in the North Eastern corner, whereas there has left some space for children to play football.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 pictures illustrate the transformation of a park from 1980 till the time being.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the infrastructure of the park is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 accessible and has more Possible spelling mistake found.creationrationalrecreationalcreationsCreationirrational
creational
 places to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 resident’s requirements.

In the year 1980, there was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one way which divided the park into two parts. A Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: "several numbers".several numbers
several number
 of trees were planted
 in the North East and flowers were grown
 in the South along with the wall. Besides
 that, there was a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 water area with several benches around it placed in the Eastern side of the park.

Looking at the maps more closely
, one can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that the alteration Did you mean "from"?from
form
 the year 1980 until This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, there were fours paths leading to all four directions of South, North, East and West. In the south Western area the pond is still
 intact while there are three benches This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
. The wall, gate and flowers removed are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 modified the bushes. A new barbecue grill area with tables has been set
 up in the North Eastern corner, whereas there has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 space for children to play football. 