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The two maps compare access routes to a city hospital in two different years.

The two maps compare access routes to a city hospital in two different years. mXQLr
The two maps compare access routes to a city hospital in two different years. It is clearly seen that significant changes with regard to the bus stops, the public and staff car park and the intersections between two roads would be made. According to the first map, in 2007, there were six bus stops on both sides of Hospital Road. However, in 2010, a large bus station was constructed on the west side of Hospital road to replace these bus stops. Also, two roundabouts were built at the intersection of Hospital Road and Ring Road as well as at the intersection of Hospital Road and City Road, both of which were linked to the bus station. Previously, there was only one car park on the east side of Hospital Road which was provided for both staff and public visitors. Nonetheless, in 2010, it was notable that a separate public car park was built to the east of the city hospital, while the old car park remained unaffected but was reserved for staff only.
The two maps compare access routes to a city
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hospital
in two
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different
years. It is
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seen
that significant
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changes
with regard to the bus
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stops
, the public and staff
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car
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park
and the intersections between two
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roads
would
be made
.

According to the
first
map, in 2007, there were six bus
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stops
on both sides of
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Hospital
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Road
.
However
, in 2010, a large bus station
was constructed
on the west side of
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Hospital
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road
to replace these bus
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stops
.
Also
, two roundabouts
were built
at the intersection of
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Hospital
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Road
and Ring
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Road
as well
as at the intersection of
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Hospital
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Road
and City
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Road
, both of which
were linked
to the bus station.

Previously, there was
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only
one
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car
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park
on the east side of
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Hospital
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Road
which
was provided
for both staff and public visitors. Nonetheless, in 2010, it was notable that a separate public
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car
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park
was built
to the east of the city
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hospital
, while the
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old
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car
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park
remained unaffected
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but
was reserved
for staff
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only
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IELTS academic The two maps compare access routes to a city hospital in two different years.

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