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The two maps below show the town of Barmouth before and after proposed new changes to stop cars entering the old town.

The two maps below show the town of Barmouth before and after proposed new changes to stop cars entering the old town. ENjYr
The provided two maps display the development of the suburb of Barmouth in the favor of prohibition of entering the car in the old area of ​​the town. Overall, there can be shown several changes in map - 2 as compare to vintage such as addition of car parking areas, padistrian footpath, bridges for crossing river and supermarket however the noticable improvement is that entrances of the town dornot allow vehicles inside. First of all, there are two areas reserved for parking facelities for cars near by entry gates of the main area and these are specificaly located Do not write below this line in two different parts (first one is in the east and second one is in the west). Moreover, both parkings are indevidually joint with flyovers which is placed on the river tweed and also they are usefull for leaving, village area via main koads. One bridge has already existed on the south west corner and the other one is constructed in the opposite side. Consequently, the town area seems nerrower than past because main road convert in walkway and this walk way full with the cafes and restaurants. The last change is that there is a supermarket near by river and at the south east part but it is quite far from village.
The provided two maps display the development of the suburb of
Barmouth
in the favor of prohibition of entering the car in the
old
area
of ​​the town.

Overall
, there can
be shown
several
changes
in map
-
2 as compare to vintage such as addition of car parking
areas
,
padistrian
footpath, bridges for crossing river and supermarket
however
the
noticable
improvement is that entrances of the town
dornot
allow
vehicles inside.

First of all
, there are two
areas
reserved for parking
facelities
for cars
near by
entry gates of the main
area
and these are
specificaly
located Do not write below this line in two
different
parts (
first
one is in the east and second one is in the west).
Moreover
, both
parkings
are
indevidually
joint with flyovers which
is placed
on the river tweed and
also
they are
usefull
for leaving, village
area
via main
koads
. One bridge has already existed on the
south west
corner and the other one
is constructed
in the opposite side.

Consequently
, the town
area
seems
nerrower
than past
because
main road convert in walkway and this walk way
full with
the
cafes
and restaurants. The last
change
is that there is a supermarket
near by
river and at the
south east
part
but
it is quite far from village.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show the town of Barmouth before and after proposed new changes to stop cars entering the old town.

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