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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 qVLDE
The maps give information about how road access to a city hospital changed from 2007 to 2010. Overall, there are some new constructures were built and the area was expanded to meet the demand of patients. In 2007, in the south of the area, the city road lied next to the hospital Rd. To the eastside, car park for staff and public was set. The ring road was set outside of the city hospital, which was located to the northside. In 2010, there were 2 roundabouts added in the way of hospital Rd. To the west side of this area, bus station was constructed. For the need of increasing patients, car park was classified into two categories for those who worked in this hospital and the public. Also, this parking area was significantly expanded to the south of the area.
The maps give information about how road access to a city
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hospital
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changed
from 2007 to 2010.

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, there are
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some
new
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constructures
were built
and the
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area
was expanded
to
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meet
the demand of patients.

In 2007, in the south of the
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area
, the city road lied
next
to the
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hospital
Rd. To the
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eastside
, car park for staff and public
was set
. The ring road
was set
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outside of
the city
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hospital
, which
was located
to the
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northside
.

In 2010, there were 2 roundabouts
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added
in the way of
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hospital
Rd. To the west side of this
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area
, bus station
was constructed
. For the need of increasing patients, car park
was classified
into two categories for those who worked in this
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hospital
and the public.
Also
, this parking
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area
was
significantly
expanded to the south of the
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IELTS academic The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

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