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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 qVLDE

The maps give information about how road access to a city hospital changed from 2007 to 2010. Overall, there are some new constructures were built and the area was expanded to meet the demand of patients. In 2007, in the south of the area, the city road lied next to the hospital Rd. To the eastside, car park for staff and public was set. The ring road was set outside of the city hospital, which was located to the northside. In 2010, there were 2 roundabouts added in the way of hospital Rd. To the west side of this area, bus station was constructed. For the need of increasing patients, car park was classified into two categories for those who worked in this hospital and the public. Also, this parking area was significantly expanded to the south of the area.

The maps give information about how road access to a city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 from 2007 to 2010.

Overall
, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 new Possible spelling mistake found.con structures
constructures
were built
 and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
was expanded
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 the demand of patients.

In 2007, in the south of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
, the city road lied next
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 Rd. To the Possible spelling mistake found.Eastsideeast side
eastside
, car park for staff and public was set
. The ring road was set
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "outside".outside
outside of
 the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
, which was located
 to the Possible spelling mistake found.Northsidenorth side
northside
.

In 2010, there were 2 roundabouts This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 in the way of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 Rd. To the west side of this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
, bus station was constructed
. For the need of increasing patients, car park was classified
 into two categories for those who worked in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 and the public. Also
, this parking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 was significantly
 expanded to the south of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. 