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The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. WymDe
The graph depicts the survey of average yearly expenditure on Wired and Wirelss telephone services of US end users' from 2001 to 2010. Overall, the Consumers' average Annual expenditure of US on Cell phone service is completely contrasting the expenditure on Residential phone service according to the survey between 2001 and 2010. On the one hand, the Consumers of wireless phone service are expanding from year to year. In 2001, the expenditure on Cell phone service is $200 and then slightly increased to $300 and later with a some fluctuations in between, it expanded gradually till the year 2007 and finally the expenditure on Cell phone service stepped up to $750 in 2010. On the other hand, the expenditure of Residential phone service is completely contrasting Cell phone service. In the year 2001, the expenditure on Cell phone Service was $700 and some fluctuations occured in the year 2006 and then from there it was significantly decreased to $400 in the final year 2010.
The graph depicts the survey of average yearly
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expenditure
on Wired and
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telephone
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services
of US
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end
users' from 2001 to 2010.

Overall
, the Consumers' average Annual
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expenditure
of US on
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Cell
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phone
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service
is completely contrasting the
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expenditure
on Residential
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phone
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service
according to the survey between 2001 and 2010.

On the one hand, the Consumers of wireless
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phone
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service
are expanding from
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year
to
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year
. In 2001, the
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expenditure
on
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Cell
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phone
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service
is $200 and then
slightly
increased to $300 and later with a
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some
fluctuations in between, it expanded
gradually
till the
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year
2007 and
finally
the
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expenditure
on
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Cell
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phone
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service
stepped up to $750 in 2010.

On the other hand
, the
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expenditure
of Residential
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phone
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service
is completely contrasting
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Cell
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phone
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service
. In the
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year
2001, the
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expenditure
on
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Cell
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phone
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Service
was $700 and
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some
fluctuations
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occured
in the
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year
2006 and then from there it was
significantly
decreased to $400 in the final
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year
2010.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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