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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. JAPe
The maps illustrate changes in access routes to a city hospital between 2007 and 2010. In the first map, it can be seen that the hospital was surrounded by a ring road. To the south of the hospital, a T-junction connected the ring road with the Hospital road, which ran from north to south and were equipped with bus stops on both of its sides. A car park for staff and the public was just behind the east bus-stops. Another road, the City Road, running from east to west crossed Hospital Road. After three years, the hospital and ring road remained largely unchanged but the roads witnessed a vast change. In 2010, two new roundabouts were built at both ends of the Hospital Rd replacing the T-junction and intersection. Furthermore, the old bus stops have been replaced by a bus station in the west and a staff-only car park in the east. The car park for the public has been moved to the east of the hospital just outside the ring road. To sum up, between 2007 and 2010 it is clear that the hospital and the ring road stayed the same, while the roads were upgraded significantly with the addition of two roundabouts, a bus station, and a separated public car-park.
The maps illustrate
changes
in access routes to a city
hospital
between 2007 and 2010.

In the
first
map, it can be
seen
that the
hospital
was surrounded
by a
ring
road
. To the south of the
hospital
, a T-junction connected the
ring
road
with the
Hospital
road
, which ran from north to south and
were equipped
with bus
stops
on both of its sides. A car park for staff and the public was
just
behind the east bus-
stops
. Another
road
, the City
Road
, running from east to west crossed
Hospital
Road.

After three years, the
hospital
and
ring
road
remained
largely
unchanged
but
the
roads
witnessed a vast
change
. In 2010, two new roundabouts
were built
at both ends of the
Hospital
Rd replacing the T-junction and intersection.
Furthermore
, the
old
bus
stops
have
been replaced
by a bus station in the west and a staff-
only
car park in the east. The car park for the public has been
moved
to the east of the
hospital
just
outside the
ring
road.

To sum up, between 2007 and 2010 it is
clear
that the
hospital
and the
ring
road
stayed the same, while the
roads
were upgraded
significantly
with the addition of two roundabouts, a bus station, and a separated public car-park.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

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