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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate the changes that have occurred in a city hospital, from 2007 to 2010. Overall, a remarkable transformation to the hospital had happened to transportation, counting the addition of parking spaces and new intersections, while the hospital venue was completely unchanged. In 2007, there had been three bus stops on either side of the hospital road leading to the access of the building. These existed no longer three years later which the west side has been occupied by a brand new bus station area. The station also associates with two roundabouts has been added. The first one placed at the junction of the hospital road and the city road to the south, and the latter at the intersection of the ring road and the end of the hospital road. Other noticeable substitutions were made in the old parking lot to the east. Its previous purpose was for both public and staffs to park vehicles but in 2010 itself separated into two areas. The old park location then designated for staff while a big territory for public users has been constructed to adjacent the hospital building to the east corner.

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changes
 that have occurred in a city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
, from 2007 to 2010.

Overall
, a remarkable transformation to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 had happened to transportation, counting the addition of parking spaces and new intersections, while the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 venue was completely unchanged.

In 2007, there had been three bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasesdiscontinues
stops
 on either side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 leading to the access of the building. These existed no longer three years later which the west side has been occupied
 by a ‘brand new’ seems to be a compound adjective in front of a noun. Use a hyphen: “brand-new”.brand-new
brand new
 bus station area. The station also
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added
. The first
 one placed at the junction of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
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road
 and the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 to the south, and the latter at the intersection of the ring You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 and the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 road.

Other noticeable substitutions were made
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old
 parking lot to the east. Its previous purpose was for both public and staffs to park vehicles This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in 2010 itself separated into two areas. The This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 park location then designated for staff while a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 territory for public users has been constructed
 to adjacent the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 building to the east corner. 