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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. 8m0B
The supplied blueprints illustrate the information about roads which helped to get the way of city hospital during 2007 and 2010. It can be seenthat in initial year, in the southeast corner, there was built a city road which run east to west and in the center of this road, a hospital road was constructed which aided to go toward city hospital. Moreover, at the both sides of hospital road, a number of bus stops were built. Later on, city hospital is surrounded by ring road which linked to parking space in the east direction where staff and public parked their cars. Moving ahead, after three years, numerous changes were seen in the road accessing. Apublic car was made separately in the east side of hospital. Then, staff car park had taken place of various bus stops. after words, a roundabout was constructed in front of city road which gave way to a gigantic bus stop that was made in the West direction of hospital road. Overall, it can be observed that a major alter was the establishment of roundabout.
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seenthat
in initial year, in the southeast corner, there
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a city
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road
which run east to west and in the center of this
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road
, a
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hospital
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road
was constructed
which aided to go toward city
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hospital
.
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, at the both sides of
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hospital
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road
, a number of bus
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stops
were built
. Later on, city
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hospital
is surrounded
by ring
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road
which linked to parking space in the east direction where staff and public parked their cars. Moving ahead, after three years, numerous
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changes
were
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seen
in the
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accessing.
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Apublic
car
was made
separately
in the east side of
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hospital
. Then, staff car park had taken place of various bus
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stops
.
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after
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was constructed
in front of city
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road
which gave way to a gigantic bus
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stop
that
was made
in the West direction of
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hospital
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road
.
Overall
, it can
be observed
that a major alter was the establishment of roundabout.

IELTS academic The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

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