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The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.

The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007. w5Xd
The pie charts compare the major concerns behind moving out and moving into Britain in the year 2007. It is measured in percentages. Overall, it is clear that a definite job was the highest priority for both immigrants and emigrants. Moreover, there was a slight difference between the proportions of accompanying, other, and formal study. In addition, a remarkable difference was in the proportion of no reason stated while looking for work was exactly double in emigration as compared to immigration. In terms of, definite job, accompany, and other, there was a slight difference in percentages. The figures for immigration were 30%, 15%, and 11% respectively in these categories whereas for emigration they were 29%, 13%, and 14% sequentially. Regarding the formal study, 26% of emigrants were remarkably higher than only 4% of emigrants whereas the people who stated no reason were approximately double in emigration than in immigration. The figures were 18% and 6% respectively. Regarding the work search, the figures were exactly double in emigration with 22% than in immigration with 12%.
The pie charts compare the major concerns behind moving out and moving into Britain in the year 2007. It
is measured
in percentages.

Overall
, it is
clear
that a
definite
job was the highest priority for both immigrants and emigrants.
Moreover
, there was a slight difference between the proportions of accompanying, other, and formal study.
In addition
, a remarkable difference was in the proportion of no reason stated while looking for work was exactly double in emigration as compared to immigration.

In terms of,
definite
job, accompany, and other, there was a slight difference in percentages. The figures for immigration were 30%, 15%, and 11%
respectively
in these categories whereas for emigration they were 29%, 13%, and 14%
sequentially
.

Regarding the formal study, 26% of emigrants were
remarkably
higher than
only
4% of emigrants whereas the
people
who stated no reason were approximately double in emigration than in immigration. The figures were 18% and 6%
respectively
. Regarding the work search, the figures were exactly double in emigration with 22% than in immigration with 12%.
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IELTS academic The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.

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