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The graph compares the proportion of energy which was produced from coal in four different countries between 1995 and 2010.

The maps show how a bookstore has chaned from 200o til now. Overall, it can be seen the layout of bookstore has witnessed remarkable changes, specifically the displayed books. Looking at 2000 map in more details, there is was al large section deciated for fiction book on the right corner of the bookstore. At the north, there was antother section for fictions books. Nin fiction books was in the eatst north. Sections for both ------------- were located in the center. The west side of the bookstore was occupied by travel, new books sections. New desk was opposite of new books section. Moving to bookstore layout now, the travel, new books sections has remained the same. The centeral area, which was used by art and hobbies books is now occupied by tables and chairs. The area for fictions books at the south is transformed into new cafe. The space, which was used to display fiction books at the north, is divided into 4 separate sections for art, hopiese and calfor books. Non Fiction section has repleced the fiction section at the north
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IELTS academic The graph compares the proportion of energy which was produced from coal in four different countries between 1995 and 2010.

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3 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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