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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map shows the differences before and after the development of tourist facilities in the coast areas. Overall, many changes would be seen in the accomodation, leisure amenities, and public facilities, while the coconut trees show to be the same. When it comes to the east area, 10 accomodation are developed with the new footpath around those accomodation, while the coconut trees remain unchaged. Moreover, developers are built the pier facing to the sea, making many canoes can step aside in there in the south, and they are established the restaurant in the opposite direction. Moreover, in the middle of the map is erected reception building with the vehicle track around it, while the foothroute is connected to that building, and in the west area the six cottages are constructed around the coconut trees with as well as the footpath. Furthermore, those paths continue to the beach with the new swimming area.
The map
shows
the differences
before
and after the development of tourist facilities in the coast areas.

Overall
,
many
changes
would be
seen
in the
accomodation
, leisure amenities, and public facilities, while the coconut trees
show
to be the same.

When it
comes
to the east area, 10
accomodation
are developed
with the new footpath around those
accomodation
, while the coconut trees remain
unchaged
.
Moreover
, developers
are built
the pier facing to the sea, making
many
canoes can step aside in there in the south, and they
are established
the restaurant in the opposite direction.

Moreover
, in the middle of the map
is erected
reception building with the vehicle
track
around it, while the
foothroute
is connected
to that building, and in the west area the six cottages
are constructed
around the coconut trees with
as well
as the footpath.
Furthermore
, those paths continue to the beach with the new swimming area.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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