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The diagram below shows the proportion of different types of transports main bridge in UK in 1965, 1985 and 2005 .

The percentage of various kinds of transports main bridge in a particular nation in during time period which is depicted by pie charts. At a fleeting glance, a tiny (9) percentage of lorries and other commercial vehicles which were observed in 1965, whilst 12% of same types of vehicle in second year which was more than doubled fold in 2005. Apart from this, a third (30) percentile of automobiles in first year; however, in 1985 and 2005 which was 4 % and 9% vehicles, respectively.
The percentage of various kinds of transports main bridge in a particular nation in during time period which
is depicted
by pie charts.

At a fleeting glance, a tiny (9) percentage of lorries and other commercial vehicles which
were observed
in 1965, whilst 12% of same types of vehicle in second year which was more than doubled fold in 2005. Apart from this, a third (30) percentile of automobiles in
first
year;
however
, in 1985 and 2005 which was 4 % and 9% vehicles,
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the proportion of different types of transports main bridge in UK in 1965, 1985 and 2005.

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