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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The changes of tourism facilities on the island before and after construction are shown in the maps. Overall, the island is equipped with new buildings and paths, while the north-east part of the island remains unchanged after the development. When it comes to the western and eastern areas, more and more accommodation buildings are constructed on the island, having six homestays in the west and nine houses in the east, and this is closely followed by the establishment of footpaths that connect the housing. However, there are no changes in the north-east region of the island except the replacement of a coconut tree to the north-east field. Moreover, located in the middle of the cottages, the reception and the restaurant are erected and equipped with the vehicle route to link each building. Therefore, there is an installation of a harbor near the sea in the south part if the shipboard visits the island. In addition, the swimming area is provided in the north-west of the beach.
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before
and after construction
are shown
in the maps.

Overall
, the
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island
is equipped
with new buildings and paths, while the north-east part of the
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island
remains unchanged after the development.

When it
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comes
to the western and eastern areas, more and more accommodation buildings
are constructed
on the
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island
, having six homestays in the west and nine
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houses
in the east, and this is
closely
followed by the establishment of footpaths that connect the housing.
However
, there are no
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changes
in the north-east region of the
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island
except the replacement of a coconut tree to the north-east field.

Moreover
, located in the middle of the cottages, the reception and the restaurant
are erected
and equipped with the vehicle route to link each building.
Therefore
, there is an installation of a harbor near the sea in the south part if the shipboard visits the
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island
.
In addition
, the swimming area
is provided
in the north-west of the beach.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

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