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The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps below depict an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Overall, it can be seen from the maps, that area of island remain unchanged however dramatic changes have taken place on the island. From the first graph we can see few trees in each side of the place and also in the west side located a beach. In the second map it is noticeable that accommodation was built. There is a cluster of housing in the west and in the center of island. Between them constructed restaurant and next to it on the north is restaurant. There is a vehicle track around the reception area. It extends to the restaurant and the pier in the south where tourists can boat. The houses are connected with footpath and tourists can go to the beach in the west side by them. In general, after the construction of the empty island turned into a tourist attraction. The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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before
and after the construction of
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some
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tourist
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, it can be
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seen
from the
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, that area of
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island
remain unchanged
however
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changes
have taken place on the island.

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graph we can
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see
few trees in each side of the place and
also
in the west side located a beach.

In the second
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map
it is noticeable that accommodation
was built
. There is a cluster of housing in the west and in the center of
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island
. Between them constructed restaurant and
next
to it on the north is restaurant. There is a vehicle
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track
around the reception area. It extends to the restaurant and the pier in the south where
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tourists
can boat. The
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houses
are connected
with footpath and
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tourists
can go to the beach in the west side by them.
In general
, after the construction of the empty
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island
turned into a
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tourist
attraction. The two
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maps
below
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show
an
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island
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before
and after the construction of
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some
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tourist
facilities.
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the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
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make
comparisons where relevant.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

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6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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