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The chart gives information about Southland's main export in 2000, 2020 and future projections for 2025

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The chart gives data about the Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2020 and future predictions for 2025. Overall, it can be seen that International tourism had the highest proportion of exports. Dairy products had second highest proportion while, meat had the lowest proportion of exports over the time period. While, 8 billion Euro of international tourism by exports in 2000. 9 billion Euro of international tourism by exports in 2020. And the estimated international tourism exports accounted for 10 billion Euros. 7 billion Euros of Dairy products by exports in 2000 whereas it reached a peak in 2020 for 10 billion Euros. And it is predicted that dairy product exports are about 9. 5 billion Euros in 2025. 6 billion Euros of Meat products were exported in 2000. However, in the year 2020 have seen a decline in exports for 5. 5 billion Euros. And the projected exports in 2025 are 5 billion Euros. The chart gives data about the Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2020 and future predictions for 2025. Overall, it can be seen that International tourism had the highest proportion of exports. Dairy products had second highest proportion while, meat had the lowest proportion of exports over the time period. While, 8 billion Euro of international tourism by exports in 2000. 9 billion Euro of international tourism by exports in 2020. And the estimated international tourism exports accounted for 10 billion Euros. 7 billion Euros of Dairy products by exports in 2000 whereas it reached a peak in 2020 for 10 billion Euros. And it is predicted that dairy product exports are about 9. 5 billion Euros in 2025. 6 billion Euros of Meat products were exported in 2000. However, in the year 2020 have seen a decline in exports for 5. 5 billion Euros. And the projected exports in 2025 are 5 billion Euros.
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IELTS academic The chart gives information about Southland's main export in 2000, 2020 and future projections for 2025

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