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The line chart gives informationof four different the amount of quentites in uk from 1974to 2002.

The line chart gives informationof four different the amount of quentites in uk from 1974to 2002. B1kp
The line graph indicates information about four different amount of quentites namely road, water, rail and pipeline which were transported in the United Kingdom between1974 and 2002. From the overall analysis, it can be conspicuoused that the highest amount of goods was transported help of the road. By contrast, the least was transported by pipeline. According to the given data, initially in 1974, around 70 million tonnes of the goods were transported to the Uk on the road this amount, which was higher rather than water, rail and pipeline, Whereas the lower amount of products were supplied to United Kingdom by pipeline following this during the period given fluctuating it showed downward trend. Delving deeper, it can be seen that slight less than 39 million tonnes of goods had been carried to the UK by rail than water (40 million tonnes) from 1974 to 1978. However, by 1982 to 1994 the goods transported by water way it showed upward trend in 1998. Interesting it was decreased 41million tonnes. Between1978and 2002, rail transportation made displayed fluctuate trend in overall years.
The line graph indicates information about four
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amount
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quentites
namely
road,
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water
,
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rail
and pipeline which
were transported
in the United Kingdom between1974 and 2002. From the
overall
analysis, it can be
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conspicuoused
that the highest
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amount
of
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goods
was transported
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help
of the road. By contrast, the least
was transported
by pipeline. According to the
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given
data,
initially
in 1974, around 70
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million
tonnes of the
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goods
were transported
to the
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Uk
on the road this
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amount
, which was higher
rather
than
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water
,
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rail
and pipeline, Whereas the lower
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amount
of products
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were
supplied
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to United Kingdom
by pipeline following this during the period
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given
fluctuating it
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showed
downward trend. Delving deeper, it can be
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seen
that slight less than 39
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million
tonnes of
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goods
had
been carried
to the UK by
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rail
than
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water
(40
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million
tonnes) from 1974 to 1978.
However
, by 1982 to 1994 the
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goods
transported by
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water
way it
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showed
upward trend in 1998. Interesting it
was decreased
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41million
tonnes. Between1978and 2002,
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rail
transportation made displayed fluctuate trend in
overall
years.
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IELTS academic The line chart gives informationof four different the amount of quentites in uk from 1974to 2002.

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