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The bar chart illustrates the data on major exports in Southland in 2000, 2016 and the estimated figures in 2025.

The bar chart illustrates the data on major exports in Southland in 2000, 2016 and the estimated figures in 2025. 1g3W
The bar chart illustrates the data on major exports in Southland in 2000, 2016 and the estimated figures in 2025. Overall, while international tourism and dairy exports have generated more revenue since 2000, sales for meat products have experienced a downward trend. It is forecasted that by 2025, only the value of international tourism will continue to grow, whereas that of dairy and meat export industries will decline. Starting at just over 8 billion pounds, international tourism was by far the largest export in Southland in 2000. This figure has increased since then to the present number of nearly 9 billion pounds. Yet international tourism could not maintain its first rank, for it has been exceeded by dairy products with approximately 10 billion pounds of revenue. That is a dramatic improvement for a single industry, as dairy and meat were the two smaller exports in 2000, with just below 7 billion and 6 billion pounds of sales respectively. Meat export, however, has fallen to as low as 5. 5 billion pounds since 2000.
The bar chart illustrates the data on major
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exports
in Southland in 2000, 2016 and the estimated figures in 2025.

Overall
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international
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tourism
and
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dairy
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exports
have generated more revenue since 2000, sales for
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meat
products have experienced a downward trend. It
is forecasted
that by 2025,
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the value of
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international
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tourism
will continue to grow, whereas that of
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dairy
and
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meat
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export
industries will decline. Starting at
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billion
pounds,
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international
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tourism
was by far the largest
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export
in Southland in 2000. This figure has increased since then to the present number of
nearly
9
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billion
pounds.
Yet
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international
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tourism
could not maintain its
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rank, for it has
been exceeded
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dairy
products with approximately 10
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billion
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a dramatic improvement for a single industry, as
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dairy
and
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meat
were the two smaller
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exports
in 2000, with
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below 7
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the data on major exports in Southland in 2000, 2016 and the estimated figures in 2025.

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