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The two maps below depict changes in a town over time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate how town has changed since 1995 until now. Overall, It is that significant development in terms of construction of new buildings and facilities, however there are some facilities have remained unchanged such as hotel and café. We can see there was a large farmland which was situated at northeast of town have completely replaced by golf land and forest park have deforested and changed to two tennis clubs. In the south of the map the fish market and serious of shops have changed to apartments and restaurants respectively. Now the sea has been equipped with fish port. Finally the number of houses which are shown on the existing plan increased and
The maps illustrate how town has
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changed
since 1995 until
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now
.

Overall
, It is that significant development in terms of construction of new buildings and facilities,
however
there are
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some
facilities have remained unchanged such as hotel and café.

We can
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see
there was a large farmland which
was situated
at northeast of town have completely replaced by golf land and forest park have deforested and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
to two tennis clubs.

In the south of the map the fish market and serious of shops have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
to apartments and restaurants
respectively
.
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Now
the sea has
been equipped
with fish port.
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Finally
the number of
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houses
which
are shown
on the existing plan increased
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and
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IELTS academic The two maps below depict changes in a town over time.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
113 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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