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The Chart below shown the value of one country's exports in various categories

The bar chart is given represents the data of the different type of products that were exported by the country during 2015 and 2016. The unit of measurement is $ billions. Overall, Petroleum and Engineered goods are the only types of product which engage maximum financial benefit. Moreover, the demand remains the same in both years i. e. 2015 and 2016. Textiles industry was the only which had lowed financial output during the year 2015 & 2016. Petroleum products earn more than 60 billion dollars by exporting the goods in the year 2015. The growth of petroleum products got even increased in the next year i. e. 2016. The same statistics replicated in the Engineered goods as near to 60 billion dollars in the year 2015 and touches the 60 billion mark very next year. Agriculture and Textile industries were the ones who got the lowest number by exporting things. The agriculture industry able to generate 30 billion dollars and the same number can be seen in both years. Adding on, textiles only able to get 25 billion dollars in the year of 2015 but shown slightest improvement in the year 2016 as 30 billion dollars produced in the year.
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by the country during 2015 and 2016. The unit of measurement is $ billions.

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which engage maximum financial benefit.
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2015 and 2016. Textiles industry was the
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which had lowed financial output during the
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2015 & 2016.

Petroleum
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earn more than 60
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billion
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by exporting the
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2015. The growth of petroleum
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2016. The same statistics replicated in the Engineered
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in the
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2015 and touches the 60
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mark
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Agriculture and Textile industries were the ones who
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the lowest number by exporting things. The agriculture industry able to generate 30
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and the same number can be
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in both years. Adding on, textiles
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25
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of 2015
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2016 as 30
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produced in the
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IELTS academic The Chart below shown the value of one country's exports in various categories

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