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Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne. The maps show the town's development over a period of time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The supplied maps compare the structure of Tarnagul city near Melbourne during the period of 1900, 1950 and after a decade. Overall, it can be vividly seen from maps that there are significant changes can be found in Tarnagul town with the passage of time. Moving into the details, in the year 1900 a road rans from east to west side in town and river crossed it. As regards, area for diary on the left side of map in 1900. Moreover, trees of oranges saw in town on east and Mandarin located alongside of river on right side in 1900. In a similar manner, there are some new places construct for different purposes in 1950, in which the position of road and river remain same but sector of diary had been replaced by space for lemons and grapefruit plants. Along with, the place of mandarins had been changed for oranges trees and new development see in the west side namely as packing sheds. Moving towards the rest of the details, the place of road and river remain same, but in Tarnagul town number of new zones constructed after 10 years. In addition to, region of lemons and grapefruit trees had been converted into wildlife sanctuary and area used for oranges plants was unused in 2000. As well as, packing sheds had been demolished by local museum and craft market in north side of town and space for track removed and tourists shop was constructed in south corner of Tarnagul. Lastly, the area for new park was constructed in just south.
The supplied maps compare the structure of
Tarnagul
city near Melbourne during the period of 1900, 1950 and after a decade.

Overall
, it can be
vividly
seen
from maps that there are significant
changes
can
be found
in
Tarnagul
town
with the passage of time.

Moving into the
details
, in the year 1900 a road
rans
from east to west side in
town
and
river
crossed it. As regards, area for diary on the
left
side of map in 1900.
Moreover
, trees of oranges
saw
in
town
on east and Mandarin located alongside of
river
on right side in 1900.
In a similar manner
, there are
some
new
places construct for
different
purposes in 1950, in which the position of road and
river
remain same
but
sector of diary had
been replaced
by space for lemons and grapefruit plants. Along with, the place of mandarins had been
changed
for oranges trees and
new
development
see
in the west side
namely
as packing sheds.

Moving towards the rest of the
details
, the place of road and
river
remain same,
but
in
Tarnagul
town
number of
new
zones constructed after 10 years.
In addition
to, region of lemons and grapefruit trees had
been converted
into wildlife sanctuary and area
used
for oranges plants
was unused
in 2000.
As well
as, packing sheds had
been demolished
by local museum and craft market in north side of
town
and space for
track
removed and tourists shop
was constructed
in south corner of
Tarnagul
.
Lastly
, the area for
new
park
was constructed
in
just
south.
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IELTS academic Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne. The maps show the town's development over a period of time.

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