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The two given pie charts give information about energy production in France in 2 years 1995 and 2005.

The two given pie charts give information about energy production in France in 2 years 1995 and 2005. RVGL8
The two given pie charts give information about energy production in France in 2 years 1995 and 2005. Looking at the pie chart, it can be seen clearly that Coal, Gas, Petro were the 3 main sources types while Nuclear and Other sources only took the small proportion of producing energy in the two research years. In 1995, Coal, Gas, Petro contributed a slightly equal percentage of energy production at 29, 08%, 29, 63%, 29, 27% respectively which were 4. 5 times higher than Nuclear sources at 6. 4%. Only 4. 9% of total energy was made from Others. In 2005, Coal and Gas continued to be the two main sources of energy generation, which showed a higher percentage than 1995’s figure at 30, 93% and 30, 31% respectively. Besides, Petro was the only source having a reducing proportion at 19, 55%, lower 9, 72% than the number in 1995. Nuclear and Others contributed 10, 10% and 9, 10% in generating energy, those figures were 4, 5% higher than 1995’s figures.
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production in France in 2 years 1995 and 2005.

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types while Nuclear and Other
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in the two research years.

In 1995, Coal, Gas,
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contributed a
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production at 29, 08%, 29, 63%, 29, 27%
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which were 4. 5 times higher than Nuclear
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at 6. 4%.
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4. 9% of total
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was made
from Others.

In 2005, Coal and Gas continued to be the two main
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of
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generation, which
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a higher percentage than 1995’s figure at 30, 93% and 30, 31%
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having a reducing proportion at 19, 55%, lower 9, 72% than the number in 1995. Nuclear
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contributed 10, 10% and 9, 10% in generating
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, those figures were 4, 5% higher than 1995’s figures.
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IELTS academic The two given pie charts give information about energy production in France in 2 years 1995 and 2005.

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