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The two charts below represent the main valid cause for study in between students of different age group and the help they got from employers.

The two charts below represent the main valid cause for study in between students of different age group and the help they got from employers. D2gXp
The two charts below represent the primary valid origin for study between scholars of other age groups and the assistance they got from heads. Analyzing the information, the first graph mentions the reason for the evaluation according to the life span of the student. For years under 26, only 10% of freshers prefer examining for their interest only. Progressive upward slope case for the student used to do study for their interest according to their age. 70% of people of age above 49 show interest in studying. Whereas for those who choose study for career faces totally opposite situation. Only 40% of people of age group 40-49 are, choose study career and interest. Talking about the second graph, more than 60% students including age under 26 get employer support. The age group of 30-39 witnessed minimum help from their profession. After the 30-39 age group slow increase in support of can be seen according to age group. To conclude, it can be seen that younger students more likely to prefer study to their career while elder people above 49 used to do study for their interest.
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. Progressive upward slope case for the
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above 49
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40-49 are, choose
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career and interest.

Talking about the second graph, more than 60%
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of 30-39 witnessed minimum
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