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The total worth of exports of five different products and the rate of change in their values from a country between 2015 and 2016 is depicted in the given charts.

The total worth of exports of five different products and the rate of change in their values from a country between 2015 and 2016 is depicted in the given charts. MeV9
The total worth of exports of five different products and the rate of change in their values from a country between 2015 and 2016 is depicted in the given charts. Overall, it is understood that except for gems and jewelry, all the other exports showed a positive trend during the period. As per the first chart, the pattern of exports of both oil and engineering products was almost in a similar range (between $57 billion and $63 billion). When the former had a positive push in exports by 3%, the latter performed better, which was by 8. 5%. Other areas where exports looked progressive were textiles and agrarian products. The total worth of textiles which was exported jumped from about $26 billion to almost $31 billion between the years, which was the highest ever growth recorded (15. 24%). There was also an increase in the agrarian exports, but it was comparatively less (0. 81%). The only exception was noted in the case of the exports of gems and jewellery, when it exhibited a negative growth of 5. 18% (from $42 billion to $40 billion).
The total worth of
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of five
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products and the rate of
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change
in their values from a country between 2015 and 2016
is depicted
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charts.

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except for
gems and jewelry, all the other
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exports
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showed
a
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positive
trend during the period.

As per the
first
chart, the pattern of
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exports
of both oil and engineering products was almost in a similar range (between $57
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billion
and $63
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billion)
. When the former had a
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positive
push in
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exports
by 3%, the latter performed better, which was by 8. 5%.

Other areas where
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exports
looked progressive were textiles and agrarian products. The total worth of textiles which
was exported
jumped from about $26
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billion
to almost $31
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billion
between the years, which was the highest ever growth recorded (15. 24%). There was
also
an increase in the agrarian
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exports
,
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but
it was
comparatively
less (0. 81%).

The
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only
exception
was noted
in the case of the
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of gems and
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jewellery
, when it exhibited a
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negative
growth of 5. 18% (from $42
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billion
to $40
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billion)
.
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IELTS academic The total worth of exports of five different products and the rate of change in their values from a country between 2015 and 2016 is depicted in the given charts.

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