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The line graph Below shows the oil consumption and production in china between 1982 and 2006

The line graph Below shows the oil consumption and production in china between 1982 and 2006 5pOD
The line graph illustrates how much oil was produced and consumed in china in a period of 24years. Over all, it is evident that production and consumption of oil in china has been increased from 2 million to above 6 million Of oil barrels per day. Initially, in 1982 the consumption and production of oil is at the same point that is at nearly 2 million barrels per day. whereas, the oil consumed remained relatively unchanged up to the year 1990 and then it started increasing gradually and in 1993 they both coincide at 3 million. however, later it rocketed over and reached at above 6 million of barrels per day. On the other hand, production inclined up to 3 million in 1986 and then it remained constant untill 1994 after that it started increasing slowly and finally in 2006 it reached approximately 3 millions of barrels per day.
The line graph illustrates how much
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oil
was produced
and consumed in
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china
in a period of 24years. Over all, it is evident that production and consumption of
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oil
in
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china
has
been increased
from 2
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million
to above 6
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million
Of
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oil
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barrels
per day.
Initially
, in 1982 the consumption and production of
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oil
is at the same point
that is
at
nearly
2
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million
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barrels
per day.
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whereas
, the
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oil
consumed remained
relatively
unchanged up to the year 1990 and then it
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started
increasing
gradually
and in 1993 they both coincide at 3
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million
.
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however
, later it rocketed over and reached at above 6
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million
of
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barrels
per day.
On the other hand
, production inclined up to 3
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million
in 1986 and then it remained constant
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untill
1994 after that it
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started
increasing
slowly
and
finally
in 2006 it reached approximately 3
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millions
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IELTS academic The line graph Below shows the oil consumption and production in china between 1982 and 2006

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