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Healthcare resources and life expectancy

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The given diagram and table represents the information about medical provision and average life expectancy (average lifespan! ! ! ) in various countries. In general, it can be seen, that the more health resources there are in the country, the greater the longevity. As the diagrams suggest, the longest life expectancy is in Japan, which has the largest number of hospital beds per thousand of population. In spite this fact, this country has the lowest health spending per person – $2, 581. It is also observed that Netherlands and US spend more money from the budget on health per person, however these country have lower longevity than Japan. Moreover, Netherlands and US have extremly small number of hospital beds per thousand of the population. In these countries, this rate is less than half that of Japan. To sum up, it can be said, that the life expectancy is more hinge on the level of provision of hospitals

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, this rate is less than half that of Japan.

To sum up, it can be said
, that the life expectancy is more hinge on the level of provision of hospitals