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The chart and table below give information aboyt healthcare resources and life expectancy in different countries

The chart and table below give information aboyt healthcare resources and life expectancy in different countries lJgK

The table and chart provide link between lifespan in diffirent countries and their healthcare resources. First of all, the given countries are well developed and there are a lot of spendings per person. Surelly, he main feature of the gistogramm is the significant number of beds per thousand in Japan. From the one hand it can shows the high level of healty but from the other it means the better hospital equipment. Moreover the table shows that even with greater amount of money invested in people’s health there are no one hundread percentage probablity that average life expectancy will be the highest. Despite of less government healt spending Japan is the leader of average life duration. Besides the most spending country by the table is USA, and it probably depends on the high level of unhealty food consumption. To sum up, all developed counties spend innormous number of money for people’s health and it surely increase average lifetime.

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a lot of
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increase
 average lifetime. 