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The three tables compare the responses of club members and general public regarding a new theatre. It can be seen that the responses were similar in some matters and different in others. When asked about the production quality of the theatre, almost similar number (70% and 67%) of club members and general public respectively gave the rating as excellent. 17% and 18% respectively of both groups opined that production quality was satisfactory and almost equal number (13% and 15%) rated it as poor. Regarding information about the plays and performances to the public, 72% and 88% club members and general public rated it as excellent; 23% and 10% respectively rated it satisfactory, whereas only a small minority of each group (5% and 2%) rated it as poor. As to the facilities of the theatre, three quarters of the club members rated the facilities as excellent, as opposed to only 55% of the general public. 23% and 19% club members and general public respectively rated the facilit

The given tables give some information about the number of international students in Canada and the USA in the school years from 2002 to 2004. It is evident that far more international students study in USA as compared to Canada. The total number of international students in Canada increased by 17%, from approximately 60, 000 to 70, 000, in the two school years. Among the given three resource countries, the biggest change came from the number of Chinese students, which was 45 per cent. The USA and India experienced a rise of 9 percent and 35 percent respectively. However, the total number of international students dipped by 2%, from over 580 thousand between 2002 and 2004. There was an increase of around 6% in the number of international students from China and Canada. By contrast, these two school years witnessed a drop of 9 percent in the number of Indian students, although it was the largest resource country in the USA. Overall, the number of international students in the USA fell, while that of international students in Canada rose, although the former one outnumbered the latter one.

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