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The line graph below shows the share values of Vtech and Relno from 2000-2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the share values of Vtech and Relno from 2000-2005. 2ryrJ
This line graph shows share values of vtech and relno over a time period of 5 years. Vtech and relno fluctuation can be seen properly, both started with same share values but after a time period of nearly 4 years relno shares was more than vtech and was leading in year 2005. From year 2000 - 2001 vtech was holding more shares than relno but in the year 2002 its shares decreased. Relno share were also decreased at that time period both the companies had a sudden drop of shares nearly 98 in vtech and 47 in relno. From year 2002 - 2005 both companies started rising again and their graph flattened for 1 year, After that time period Vtech started gaining shares at a slow rate and relno share was growing rapidly. After year 2004 vtech shares seems to be less growing in the future, relno got surge in graph, both graph intersected at a point between year 2004- 2005. In these 5 years both companies’ shares were fluctuating.
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