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The three pie charts show the breakdown of spending at a particular university in Canada in 2000, 2005 and 2010.

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The three pie charts show the breakdown of spending at a particular university in Canada in 2000, 2005 and 2010. Salaries made up the largest part of expenditure in all three years for which data has been provided (2000, 2005 and 2010). Academic salaries made up 39% of the total cost in 2000 and this figure increased to 49% in 2005 before decreasing to 44% in 2010. In contrast, technical and administrative salaries have declined steadily and were 29%, 23% and 16% in the years 2000, 2005 and 2010, respectively. The remaining budget was spent on consumables, equipment and insurance. The spending on consumables was in the range of 14-18% in 2000, 2005 and 2010, while the spending on equipment varied widely in the 3 years provided and was in the range of 7-16% of the total budget. Insurance costs made up a very small percentage of the overall budget at 2-4% in 2000 and 2005 but this figure jumped to 8% in 2010.
The three pie charts
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show
the breakdown of spending at a particular university

in Canada in 2000, 2005 and 2010.

Salaries made up the largest part of expenditure in all three years for which

data has
been provided
(2000, 2005 and 2010). Academic salaries made up 39%

of the total cost in 2000 and this figure increased to 49% in 2005
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before


decreasing to 44% in 2010.
In contrast
, technical and administrative salaries

have declined
steadily
and were 29%, 23% and 16% in the years 2000, 2005 and

2010,
respectively
.

The remaining budget
was spent
on consumables, equipment and insurance.

The spending on consumables was in the range of 14-18% in 2000, 2005 and

2010, while the spending on equipment varied
widely
in the 3 years provided

and was in the range of 7-16% of the total budget. Insurance costs made up a

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very
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small
percentage of the
overall
budget at 2-4% in 2000 and 2005
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but
this

figure jumped to 8% in 2010.
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