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The diagram below compares the plan of a school in 1989 and 2010

The diagram below compares the plan of a school in 1989 and 2010 0Q71
The maps compare the plan of a school in 1980 to 2010. Overall, it is clear seen that number of changes were there such as an increase the size of play area. The principal changes were the addition new classroom, a library was put back with a new classroom, an office was added and a car park, a driveway both were added. In detail, in 1980, a play area was occupying in the north side and in the left side of play area, there were two classrooms and a hall. On the right side of play area there was a classroom, a library and an office. A play area and an office ‘s entrance door was located in the south side.  In 2010, a number of changes were occurred in given time period. Firstly, size of play area was increased. In the left side of play area two new classrooms was added and beside the classroom there was a hall. On the right side of play area the library was replaced with classroom and there were two classrooms and an office. Besides, the office there was new car park and a driveway. In towards the entrance was there was a kitchen and a library.
The maps compare the plan of a school in 1980 to 2010.
Overall
, it is
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clear
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seen
that number of
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changes
were there such as an increase the size of
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play
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area
. The principal
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changes
were the addition
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new
classroom, a library
was put
back with a
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new
classroom, an
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office
was
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added
and a car park, a driveway both were
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added
. In detail, in 1980, a
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play
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area
was occupying in the north side and in the
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left
side of
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play
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area
, there were two classrooms and a hall. On the right side of
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play
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area
there was a classroom, a library and an
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office
. A
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play
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area
and an
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office
‘s entrance door
was located
in the south side.  In 2010, a number of
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changes
were occurred
in
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time period.
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, size of
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play
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was increased
. In the
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left
side of
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play
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area
two
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classrooms was
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added
and beside the classroom there was a hall. On the right side of
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play
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area
the library
was replaced
with classroom and there were two classrooms and an
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office
.
Besides
, the
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there was
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car park and a driveway. In towards the entrance was there was a kitchen and a library.
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IELTS academic The diagram below compares the plan of a school in 1989 and 2010

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