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The two bar charts show the actual and expected percentage of the population in three age groups (0-15, 16-55 and 55+ years) in Iran and Spain in 2010 and 2060.

The two bar charts show the actual and expected percentage of the population in three age groups (0-15, 16-55 and 55+ years) in Iran and Spain in 2010 and 2060. Pppj
The two bar charts show the actual and expected percentage of the population in three age groups (0-15, 16-55 and 55+ years) in Iran and Spain in 2010 and 2060. In Iran in 2010 the number of people in the 0-15 age group was just under half (48. 2%) of the total population, while the population aged 16-55 years was 61 slightly higher (48. 3%). In contrast, the number of Iranian people aged over 55 represented only 3. 5% of the population. By 2060, it is expected that the population will have aged significantly, with the number of people aged 0-15 years expected to decrease to 43. 1%, while the number of people in the 16-55 and 55+ age groups is expected to increase to 50. 2% and 6. 8%, respectively. In Spain in 2010 the percentage of young people was much lower (14. 7%) compared to Iran, while the 16-55 and 55+ age groups made up 61. 4% and 23. 9% of the population, respectively. By 2060 the population of Spain is expected to age further with the number of people in the 0-15, 16-55 and 55+ age groups expected to be 11. 3%, 48. 5% and 40. 2%, respectively.
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IELTS academic The two bar charts show the actual and expected percentage of the population in three age groups (0-15, 16-55 and 55+ years) in Iran and Spain in 2010 and 2060.

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