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The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. WrdN
The bar charts provide information about ownership of computer is separated two main of titles, which are general and people's education levels owning, between 2002, also 2010. Overall, having electronic invention is increased compared with 2002 to 2010. Moreover, the data is not fluctuating as opposite information has been remained stability increasing every single year. However, between two classifications are related with each other due to the fact that years illustrate it that, which is the second graph. In 2010, jobs are connected more technology inventions than in 2002. For instance, in first data, which is ownership, has 55% and %75 owning computer information giving us, also those are in 2002 and 2010 respectively. In the second statistic, computers are became vital needs because the data was significantly gone up on levels of education, but the another graph has not been possessed a harmony with secondly graph. Consequently, under high school level's humans were using inventions in 2010.
The bar charts provide information about ownership of computer
is separated
two main of titles, which are general and
people
's education levels owning, between 2002,
also
2010.

Overall
, having electronic invention
is increased
compared with 2002 to 2010.
Moreover
, the data is not fluctuating as opposite information has
been remained
stability increasing every single year.

However
, between two classifications
are related
with each other due to the fact that years illustrate it that, which is the second graph. In 2010, jobs
are connected
more technology inventions than in 2002.
For instance
, in
first
data, which is ownership, has 55% and %75 owning computer information giving us,
also
those are in 2002 and 2010
respectively
.

In the second statistic, computers are
became
vital needs
because
the data was
significantly
gone up on levels of education,
but
the another graph has not
been possessed
a harmony with
secondly
graph.
Consequently
, under high school level's humans were using inventions in 2010.
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IELTS academic The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.

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