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The three pie charts below show yhe changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001

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The graph illustrates the substitutes of expending during the year by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. The highest percentage of pay out was for teachers' salaries especially in 1991it reached 50%. The lowest spending was for insurance in 1981. Surprisingly the spending during the three years are fluctuated. Expenditure on teachers' salaries was the highest among three years. In 1981 it showed 40% after decade it increased a bit Becoming in 2001it decreased slowly the percentage was 45% one of the main expending was for the workers' salaries. In 1981 it was 28% till the 2001 it decreased dramatically the percentage was 15%. Spending resources rose highly during the three years in 1981 it was 15% becoming 2001 it showed 23%. Similarly the expenditure for insurance saw go up trend growing from only 2% to 8% by 2001. The last spending was for furniture and equipment percentage of pay outs fluctuated during the appropriate years. In 1981 it saw 15% after decade it declined significantly to 5% and 2001 it increased dramatically to 23%

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