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Pie char about spending of Australian and Japan teenagers in 2019

Pie char about spending of Australian and Japan teenagers in 2019 nqgn

The pie charts provides information about the money spending habits of Australian and Japan teenagers in 2019. Overall, teens in Japan prefers to buy computer games while in Australia they spend more on food. In Japan, video games dominated the spending of a teenager with 37% of their money is spent on it. Furthermore, the next biggest cost came from buying meals where it accounted for 22% of their budget. Meanwhile in Australia, the reverse happened, the purchase of food took more than a third of the budget at 37%, while 22% is spent on games. Other necessities and clothes accounted for 8% and 25% of their overall purchase. Similar with Japan, books took the smallest proportion of their spending with just 8% spent by Australians teens and 9% spent by Japanese teenagers.

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Japan
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teenagers
 in 2019.

Overall
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Japan
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buy
 computer games while in Australia they spend more on food.

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Japan
, video games dominated the spending of a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenileadolescent
teenager
 with 37% of their money is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 on it. Furthermore
, the next
 biggest cost came from buying meals where it accounted for 22% of their budget.

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Meanwhile
 in Australia, the reverse happened, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 of food took more than a third of the budget at 37%, while 22% is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 on games. Other necessities and clothes accounted for 8% and 25% of their overall
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
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Japan
, books took the smallest proportion of their spending with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
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teenagers
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