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The given two maps show development of the city between 1990 and 2005

The given two maps show development of the city between 1990 and 2005 Y6VB
The given two maps presents data on developments which took place between 1990 and 2005. Overall, a comparison of two maps reveals a change from a largely to a mainly urban area. In 1990, the city was a more rural area with a number of trees. However, during the next years, the town witnessed some noticeable changes. The most apparent one is the construction of new buildings. In addition, some buildings were knocked down in the northern part of the city and aeroport was built opposite the path. Superman in the middle of the city was placed instead of some trees. Moreover, in the southern part of the town the relocation of the railway station was appeared and along the east, ferry was built in the corner. Furthermore, in the eastern north school and hospital were constructed. New building was replaced instead of two big buildings in the western north of the town.
The
given
two maps presents data on developments which took place between 1990 and 2005.
Overall
, a comparison of two maps reveals a
change
from a
largely
to a
mainly
urban area. In 1990, the city was a more rural area with a number of trees.
However
, during the
next
years, the town witnessed
some
noticeable
changes
. The most apparent one is the construction of new
buildings
.
In addition
,
some
buildings
were knocked
down in the northern part of the city and
aeroport
was built
opposite the path. Superman in the middle of the city
was placed
instead
of
some
trees.
Moreover
, in the southern part of the town the relocation of the railway station
was appeared
and along the east, ferry
was built
in the corner.
Furthermore
, in the eastern north school and hospital
were constructed
. New
building
was replaced
instead
of two
big
buildings
in the western north of the town.
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IELTS academic The given two maps show development of the city between 1990 and 2005

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  American English
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6.0
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