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The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

The pie charts demonstrate us specific UK school’s dispersion of annual spending in three different years. Overall, spendings observed in five diverse areas and teachers’ salaries had the biggest rate in both in all three years with almost half of spending with 40%, %50 and 45% although the lowest spending rate belonged to insurance. In terms of the figure of other workers' salaries, it was observed a decrease from 28% to 15% in 1981 and 2001 while a little amount of increase happened on Insurance rate with 2%, 3% and 8% respectively during the years. When looking at the percentage of resources, although it displayed a rise between 1981 and 1991, end of the time it dropped by 6 percent from the beginning. Opposite of this, rate of Furniture and equipment showed a fluctuating direct of rising with 15% and 23% from 1981 to 2001 compeared with resources.

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 belonged to insurance.

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