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The diagram below give information about the eiffel tower in Paris and an outline project go extend it underground

The diagram below give information about the eiffel tower in Paris and an outline project go extend it underground 1jPX

The Eiffel Tower is situated close to the Seine River in Paris It is a metal structure that is 1, 083 feet high and weighs 7, 417 tonnes The tower has been a tourist attraction since 1889, when it was built and there are 1. 665 steps that can be climbed in order to reach the two viewing platforms There are now plans to build below the foundations of the tower. These plans include the development of five underground levels that will incorporate the lower's ticket office, shopping facilities a cinema and museum and two floors of underground parking Although details have yet to be finalised, the principle is that the five floors will be connected by two vertical passenger lifts on either side of the tower. In addition, the floor immediately below the tower which is planned to house the ticket office will also consist of a large atrium with a glass ceiling so that visitors can look directly up at the tower itself

The Eiffel Tower is situated
 close to the Seine River in Paris It is a metal structure that is
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083 feet
 high and weighs 7, 417 tonnes The tower has been a tourist attraction since 1889, when it was built
 and there are 1. 665 steps that can be climbed
 in order to reach the two viewing platforms

There are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 plans to build below the foundations of the tower. These plans include the development of five underground levels that will incorporate the Do not use 's with a verb. Did you mean "lowers", "lows"?lowerslows
lower's
 ticket office, shopping facilities a cinema and museum and two floors of underground parking Although This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 have yet
 to be Possible spelling mistake. 'finalised' is British English.finalized
finalised
, the principle is that the five floors will be connected
 by two vertical Possible agreement error. The noun 'passenger' seems to be countable, so consider using: "passengers".passengers
passenger
 lifts on either side of the tower. In addition
, the floor immediately below the tower which is planned
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 the ticket office will Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphalso.also!also?also:also,also;
also


consist of a large atrium with a glass ceiling This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that visitors can look directly
 up at the tower itself