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The charts below give information about two Brazilian cities. Summarise the information and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about two Brazilian cities. pBDm
The graphs reveal data about rainfall and temperature in Brasilia and Recife. In Recife, the rainiest months are June and July, with approximately 250 mm and 23 rainy days. In contrast, at the same time in Brasilia, there are only two or three days of rain with more or less 10 mm. The rainy season of Brasilia occurs in November and December, at 260 mm and with more than 20 wet days each month. Meanwhile, in Recife, there are only ten days of rain each month. The temperature in both regions also appears to have many differences. It seems that Brasilia has a more extreme condition regarding temperature alone. There is a considerable fluctuation in the area: from May to August, the temperature reaches its peak at roughly 38 degrees Celcius, but it can dramatically reduce to its lowest point at below 5 degrees or even 0 degree in June. However, the condition in Recife tends to be more stable as it remains 20-35 degrees in the whole year. A more detailed look at the chart displays that the amount of rainfall in Recife is higher than that of Brasilia. The two regions have similar hours of sunshine, but Brasilia has more thunder. Overall, the graphs clearly show a contrasting trend in the rainfall and temperature of both regions.
The graphs reveal data about rainfall and
temperature
in
Brasilia
and Recife.

In Recife, the rainiest months are June and July, with approximately 250 mm and 23 rainy days.
In contrast
, at the same time in
Brasilia
, there are
only
two or three days of rain with more or less 10 mm. The rainy season of
Brasilia
occurs in November and December, at 260 mm and with more than 20 wet days each month. Meanwhile, in Recife, there are
only
ten days of rain each month.

The
temperature
in both regions
also
appears to have
many
differences. It seems that
Brasilia
has a more extreme condition regarding
temperature
alone. There is a considerable fluctuation in the area: from May to August, the
temperature
reaches its peak at roughly 38
degrees
Celcius
,
but
it can
dramatically
reduce
to its lowest point at below 5
degrees
or even 0
degree
in June.
However
, the condition in Recife tends to be more stable as it remains 20-35
degrees
in the whole year.

A more detailed look at the chart displays that the amount of rainfall in Recife is higher than that of
Brasilia
. The two regions have similar hours of sunshine,
but
Brasilia
has more thunder.

Overall
, the graphs
clearly
show
a contrasting trend in the rainfall and
temperature
of both regions.
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