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The three circle graphs explain the proportion of school expenditure in the UK from 1981 to 2001.

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The three circle graphs explain the proportion of school expenditure in the UK from 1981 to 2001. In 1981, the largest percentage was came from teachers’ wage which accounted for 40%. Meanwhile, the smallest was for insurance that counted for 2%. Both of it were increased approximately 4-5% in the end compared to the beginning. The tutor’s salary, however, had the biggest part in 1991, that estimated took half of the spending. On the other hand, the other worker’s had constantly been downed from 28% to 15%. For the other categories: the resources and furniture & equipment had been fluctuated during the three decades. In comparison with the start, the resources degraded in numbers for 6% and the furniture & equipment risen from 15% to 23%. Overall, there were different percentage and trend for each category during 1981 and 2001 that can reflect the actual outcome from school in the the UK. Despite that, the largest and smallest proportion was still the same until 2001.

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