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The map show the changes of pantland from 1980 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant .

The map show the changes of pantland from 1980 to 2007. d1kr
The report is being written about the transformation of pentland and between 1980 and 2007. Almost each aspect of the battle and changed completely expect a road over the year. Aliya seat that become a yacht marina which is located in north side of the pantland. in 1980 the industrial area was replaced by multi story car park as well as swimming pool in north west corner in the year 2007. moreover the road rolled out in centre of the pantland which is devided it in four sections. the place is upgraded to cinema which is saturated in south west. Furthermore, in 1980 car parking in north east side which transformed into apartments and many shops. However, in south east corner only grassland in 1980 but, in 2007 many houses built in this area, which was devided in two parts by a street.
The report is
being written
about the transformation of
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pentland
and between 1980 and 2007. Almost each aspect of the battle and
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changed
completely
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expect
a road over the year.
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Aliya
seat that become a yacht marina which
is located
in north side of the
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pantland
.
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in
1980 the industrial area
was replaced
by multi story car park
as well
as swimming pool in
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north west
corner in the year 2007.
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moreover
the road rolled out in
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centre
of the
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pantland
which is
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devided
it in four sections.
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the
place
is upgraded
to cinema which
is saturated
in
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south west
.
Furthermore
, in 1980 car parking in
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north east
side which transformed into apartments and
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many
shops.
However
, in
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south east
corner
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only
grassland in 1980
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but
, in 2007
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many
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houses
built in this area, which was
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devided
in two parts by a street.
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IELTS academic The map show the changes of pantland from 1980 to 2007.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
143 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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