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The tendency of people to imitate each other is evident in the popularity of fashionable clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?

The tendency of people to imitate each other is evident in the popularity of fashionable clothes and consumer goods. Lbp56
It is undeniable that people are become more fashionable from last one decade. However, individuals are copy to others to shown popularity in the fashionable clothes and consumer goods. I totally agree with this statement and my points will dicuss in the impending paragraphs. To commence with, there are some points of why people copy to anothers. Firstly, for the good reputation. To site an example, when the poor people buy somethings to copy anothers for the good reputation in the eyes of society. Moreover, they want to handsome that's why they also copy to anothers Furthermore, some people showoff their things then others can feel jealous from that things then they also copy to anothers. For example, nowadays, in Punjab, most of bought big cars for the showoff and for good reputation in society and they also show how much rich they are. In addition, when they look to things of another then sometimes, that thing touched their heart then they also do copy. To conclude, i would like to reiterate that people are copy to anothers for the good reputation
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people
are become
more fashionable from last one decade.
However
, individuals are
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copy
to others to shown popularity in the fashionable clothes and consumer
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goods
. I
totally
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agree
with this statement and my points will
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dicuss
in the impending paragraphs.

To commence with, there are
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some
points of why
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people
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copy
to
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anothers
.
Firstly
, for the
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good
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reputation
. To site an example, when the poor
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people
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buy
somethings to
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copy
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anothers
for the
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good
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reputation
in the eyes of society.
Moreover
, they want to handsome that's why they
also
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copy
to
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anothers


Furthermore
,
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some
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people
showoff their things then others can feel
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jealous from
that things then they
also
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copy
to
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anothers
.
For example
, nowadays, in Punjab, most of
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bought
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big
cars for the showoff and for
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good
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reputation
in
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society and
they
also
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show
how much rich they are.

In addition
, when they look to things of another then
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sometimes
, that thing touched their heart then they
also
do copy.

To conclude
,
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i
would like to reiterate that
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people
are
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to
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anothers
for the
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good
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reputation

IELTS academic The tendency of people to imitate each other is evident in the popularity of fashionable clothes and consumer goods.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
181 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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