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The tabular chart ilustrates the information about the proportion of costs which are allocated by the University students on various kinds of things in country A, country B, country C.

The tabular chart ilustrates the information about the proportion of costs which are allocated by the University students on various kinds of things in country A, country B, country C. p2k0
The tabular chart ilustrates the information about the proportion of costs which are allocated by the University students on various kinds of things in country A, country B, country C. Overall, it is evident from the chart that University pupils are spent money with the topmost ratio on apartment instead of others in nation A and nation B. It can be cleary seen that the percentages are equal of expenditure which are spent on meal and leisure activities per year by the learners in nation A. Apart from that, in nation C, the Highest average of food costs are noticed as compare to the nation B and C. Furthermore, the university tutees of nation A are allocated extremely the least finance on books and others with 3% and 8% annually respectively. Moreover, the ratio of books cost are the maximum in the country C rather than of two given realms.
The tabular chart
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ilustrates
the information about the proportion of costs which
are allocated
by the University students on various kinds of things in
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country
A,
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country
B,
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country
C.
Overall
, it is evident from the chart that University pupils
are spent
money with the topmost ratio on apartment
instead
of others in
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nation
A and
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nation
B. It can be
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cleary
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seen
that the percentages are equal of expenditure which
are spent
on meal and leisure activities per year by the learners in
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nation
A. Apart from that, in
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nation
C, the Highest average of food costs
are noticed
as compare to the
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nation
B and C.
Furthermore
, the university
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tutees
of
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nation
A
are allocated
extremely
the least finance on books
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and others
with 3% and 8%
annually
respectively
.
Moreover
, the ratio of books
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cost
are the maximum in the
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country
C
rather
than of two
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given
realms.
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IELTS academic The tabular chart ilustrates the information about the proportion of costs which are allocated by the University students on various kinds of things in country A, country B, country C.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
150 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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