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The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009. p2w0
The table indicates the ratios of Students Attending Four Secondary School Types from 2000 to 2009. Overall, when we take a look at the table, we can see the figures for the topics have changed over the years. A number of items have significant variations. The first type of school is the Specialist Schools. The amount of the Specialist Schools have decreased over the years with 12 %, 11 % and 10 % between 2000 and 2009. The second type of school is Grammar Schools. These schools have also diminished. It was 24 %, 19 % and 12 % in 2000, 2005 and 2009. The third type of schools are Voluntary-controlled schools with 52 %, 38 % and 20 % from 2000 to 2009. The reputition of these kinds of schools have decreased by years. The fourth and the last school is Communtiy Schools. This school was 12 % in 2000. However, have made a noticeable differences. Firstly, up to 33 % after that 58 % in 2005 and 2009 respectively.
The table indicates the ratios of Students Attending Four Secondary
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from 2000 to 2009.

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the figures for the topics have
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over the years. A number of items have significant variations.

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is the Specialist
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have decreased over the years with 12 %, 11 % and 10 % between 2000 and 2009.
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is Grammar
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diminished. It was 24 %, 19 % and 12 % in 2000, 2005 and 2009. The third
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are Voluntary-controlled
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with 52 %, 38 % and 20 % from 2000 to 2009. The
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have decreased by years.
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Communtiy
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was 12 % in 2000.
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, up to 33 % after that 58 % in 2005 and 2009
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